I’m trying to decide if I wanted to like this more than I did, or if a liked it more than I wanted to. It’s confusing.
Since Dan Brown’s success years ago with The Da Vinci Code, publishers across the world have realize that there’s money on the table for a writer to have their own completely original idea about a quest for lost treasure that, oops, isn’t treasure at all but really information that will bring Christendom to its knees and expose it as fraud once and for all. Writers have jumped on board by the dozens, from Raymond Khoury on down to the author of the novel reviewed here, James Becker. (True story: Daniel Easterman was doing this back in the 90’s, but I guess everyone forgot.)
So, how do you set yourself apart from the masses? There is only one way, as far as I am concerned, and that’s with characters. (I would say humor would work as well, since most of these books are dry as a Texas July. But unless your book is called The Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Templars, humor is off the table.)
With characters in mind, I was pleasantly surprised with how The Lost Treasure of the Templars started out. Robin Jessop is the main character, a twenty-something woman running a rare book shop. She knows it’s not a profession most young women get into, but she enjoys it. She’s not worried at all about treasure or international conspiracies, or even history for that matter, when she comes across an old book that isn’t even a book at all and houses a coded scroll. It piques her interest because the unique object and scroll might both be valuable to a collector. She contacts a current client who has shown interest in such things to help her figure it out.
David Mallory is a computer encryption expert who’s been researching his family tree. He can’t help but be drawn in to what Robin has found, so he decides to take a few days away to visit and help her out.
I thought this was a reasonably fresh idea. Essentially two normal people, not cops or archeologists or famous experts in anything, who stumble upon a mystery. In fact, the best part of the book is the first third, where Robin and David sit around the artifacts, discussing real ancient encrypting techniques as they try to decrypt the scroll. There’s an interesting angle on history there and the author plays it out well. The characters feel real enough and the situation plausible.
Then the militant religious order with a global reach drops by, as they must in all these novels. That’s where things break down. Suddenly, there’s two-hundred pages of chases and gun fights and almost zero plot development. The mystery is put on hold, and when it does come back, it treads the same ground and goes nowhere. The characters development stops, then starts going off in wildly implausible directions that left me feeling like the author dropped them in there simply as an excuse for certain things to happen.
I won’t say what these things were, but let’s say you found yourself on a deserted island with your wife (or whoever you like) and you’ve known this person for years and they’ve always been a high school English teacher. Suddenly you need an emergency appendectomy. Your significant other produces hastily made surgical tools and performs the procedure flawlessly, saving your life. When asked, they say, “I have a medical degree but I thought surgery was boring, so I went into teaching while also casually exploring how to make modern tools from everyday objects you might find on a deserted island. What luck! It sure came in handy today. I can also build a submarine out of those palm trees over there.”
Welcome to The Lost Treasure of the Templars.
Nice review! Loved the Hitchhikers Guide to the Templars idea. I’d read it…
Sorry, Bookstooge, I’ve been on vacation! I saw your comment and I have to say, I would read it, too. I claim no copyright, so feel free to write it. If only Robert Asprin was still around…
No worries mate!
As for writing, not so much for me. I’m a reader, not a writer 😉